OK Ok ok.
No posts in a long time - I know. I am taking screenwriting classes at UCLA and it’s taking up my writing energy. Sorry!
The classes have been great so far - we were even able to film our best scenes! Here’s mine - and watch it until the end. That last line is my best writing ever.
Also, it’s not easy to incorporate the word “lookit” into a serious dramatic scene between two adults. This writer is brilliant.
If I ever do write anything as bad as this - someone please kill me. Seriously - you have my permission. Just make sure it’s quick and I don’t see you coming.
May 28th, 2008 at 9:59 pm
Wow. Uhm. How many times does she say “don’t touch me?”
Oh and is her voice dubbed over? Cuz it osunds like a 60 yr old husky woman.
September 1st, 2008 at 10:40 am
my favorite part is at 2:14, when the guy looks over at the director off-camera. oof. I’ve seen amateur porn shot with better acting!